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Heh heh heh this is gonna be FUN.

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Nice work! I remember you said you were looking to achieve Douglas Adams energy here and I'd call it a success! I really appreciated the tea and cup discourse. 😆

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Favorite part: Joey hated conspiracy theorists. He however liked money. The woman could pay him big bucks, the bucks would be the standard size but they would be more in number.

🤣 had me dying. Great job 👏

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This was a lot of fun. Easy to read with a great sense of humor and wit to it! Thanks for publishing this.

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It begins!

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The story is so much fun! I can't wait to see what everyone does with it.

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Excellent pace . I didn’t see the end coming . GREAT!

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The comedy you've stashed into every nook and cranny like candy is addictive. LOVE IT!

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Great twist at the end! I have to read on

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late to the party but enjoyed this very much!

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