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Joyce Reynolds-Ward's avatar

Heh heh heh this is gonna be FUN.

Anthony Lora's avatar

Nice work! I remember you said you were looking to achieve Douglas Adams energy here and I'd call it a success! I really appreciated the tea and cup discourse. 😆

Arjun Agarwal's avatar

Glad you liked it!

Winston Malone's avatar

Favorite part: Joey hated conspiracy theorists. He however liked money. The woman could pay him big bucks, the bucks would be the standard size but they would be more in number.

🤣 had me dying. Great job 👏

Ryan Pond | NUEXGUY's avatar

This was a lot of fun. Easy to read with a great sense of humor and wit to it! Thanks for publishing this.

Arjun Agarwal's avatar

Thanks a lot for the compliments!

Geoffrey Golden's avatar

It begins!

Arjun Agarwal's avatar

(spooky piano music plays in the background)

Jackie Dana's avatar

The story is so much fun! I can't wait to see what everyone does with it.

Shirl B's avatar

Excellent pace . I didn’t see the end coming . GREAT!

The TransAtlantic Pearl's avatar

The comedy you've stashed into every nook and cranny like candy is addictive. LOVE IT!

Reina Cruz's avatar

Great twist at the end! I have to read on

J. M. Elliott's avatar

late to the party but enjoyed this very much!